Well Hi…. How are you all?
I’ve been in a bit of sombre mood the last couple of days and although happy, I just can’t seem to shake it…. I’ve been thinking about my writing and wondering if it all sounds the same? Then I get some fab comments on here and some lovely messages from my email only followers and a wonderful message from a friend that looks in from time to time…. It kinda makes it feel special!!
So trying to lift my mood and find the inspiration to write some thing that feels really good. It’s raining outside and I love the rain always have, it might just give the inspiration I need? I wonder why we are most critical of what we ourselves write? I’ve read so much on here and am following so many talented people, You all should be proud!! 🙂
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Moving down the path
my feet do bleed,
I’m walking on broken letters
but their not what I need,
This path is forever going
and I can’t see the end,
At the moment these broken letters
are my only friend,
Look up at the dark grey clouds the sky is crying
the drops like fire they burn my skin as the darkened sky weeps,
The atmosphere dark and sombre
the light and sun sleeps,
My blood keeps on flowing
deep into the ground,
And my screams are ripped out in a vortex
and the rain lashes down and I’m drowned….
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Looks like a poem/thought formed after all! Now I need to write and date it in my book! That’s the first time I have thought of a title before writing the poem!!
Ok I’m off, Have a wonderful day all and I hope the coming week is the best it can be for you all.
Happy hugs, me.x.
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I have nominated you for The Reader Appreciation Award! See my post for the details, and thanks for continually supporting my writing! http://readtomlucas.com/2012/06/04/my-first-blogging-award-what-a-feeling/
You are so right we are very critical about our own work, finding it hard to find faith in our verses
We all get in these moods once in awhile, especially since we are our worst critics. Great post.